I Don’t Know How to Finish

I Can’t Believe it! I’ve written a book! I’ve created people who ran around and did things, loved each other, hated each other, saved each other from danger. I love them ALL! Yesss! But I can’t seem to stop going back into their lives and “fixing” this and “fixing” that. Just in case. Two posts ago (“Blame it on Writer’s Block”), I wrote: We need to choose one story/book/article and be faithful to it until the end. When we getRead more

Surprise! Surprise!

In the old days of Saturday afternoon Western movies, the Cavalry would often arrive at the last moment to save the day. de·us ex ma·chi·na (dāəs eks ˈmäkənə,ˌdāəs eks ˈmakənə/); noun an unexpected power or event saving a seemingly hopeless situation, especially as a contrived plot device in a play or novel. (“We” don’t do that in our writing, do we?) There’s nothing as wonderful as a surprise ending whether it’s in a movie, a story, a book or aRead more

Recycling Characters

Story Idea but Don’t Know Where to Begin? If you happened to read my November 7/15 Post, “Using Backstory without Using It” and took it to heart and tried it, you’ll be thrilled to learn that all your hard work might have paid off. Instead of sitting there looking at a blank screen as you try to begin your next work, grab one of those minor characters from your last novel — how about the gas jockey, the one yourRead more

Describe through Action

Actions Show Character and/or Motivation From Really Stupid Writing Mistakes: How to Avoid Them: Because we know everything about our character, we know why he does what he does. The reader won’t care a whit that Bill was frightened by a dog when he was three years old because that would get in the way of the story. But we (as the  writer) know that when Roger chases Bill out of the restaurant and Bill jumps that fence, and there’sRead more

Using Backstory without Using It

The importance of backstory cannot be overemphasized. It’s a real joy when we create a character that comes alive and starts going her own way, thinking on her own, and making decisions. When it happens, we can pat ourselves on the back. What is backstory? It’s everything we (author) know about our character that never makes it into the final product. Because? It has nothing to do with the current story. Why bother with it then? The more backstory weRead more

Making a Character Loveable

According to The Story Solution: 23 Actions All Great Heroes Must Take by Eric Edson [http://www.thestorysolution.com/], giving a character a few of the following traits will have readers bonding to her/him like cyanoacrylate (Super Glue®). I don’t think I need to say why this is a good thing. courage unfair injury skill funny just plain nice in danger loved by friends & family hardworking obsessed These speak for themselves for the most part, but we need to take note ofRead more